Compared with you've done, I don't think there needs to be that much vertical space devoted to the large logo, a large quote about philosophy (I'd prefer a short paragraph), and a large quote about history (again, a short paragraph seems right, beyond this there's Wikipedia). Instead I'd like to see more technical information or pointers for the non-expert, such as:
- Direct access to documentation for people who write portable programs/scripts/documents, for instance:
- List of software (packages, versions, …) (and popular third-party repositories if applicable)
- Man pages
- Common tasks with a one-line answer, for instance:
- I want to install a program on a machine where I have root access, what command do I use? (
pacman -S, apt-get install, …)
- The main admin is on holiday and there's an Apache hole, how do I make sure the security updates are applied? (
pacman -Syu, apt-get update; apt-get upgrade, …)
I've written a first draft of debian and ubuntu. Maybe after things settle down we can try to reach a consensus on a template.